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Shortcomings (2023) — Screenplay

A cynical Bay Area filmmaker navigates failed romance and friendship while chasing elusive connection across America.

Written by
Adrian Tomine
Genre
Comedy, Drama, Romance
Studio
Topic Studios, Imminent Collision, Picture Films
Length
106 pages

Study this script for its sharp, naturalistic dialogue that reveals character through argument and deflection rather than exposition. The episodic road-trip structure offers a masterclass in balancing comedic misadventure with melancholy character study, and the film's refusal to offer easy resolutions makes its flawed protagonist compelling to track.

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